tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-993729896040206941.post721196564585113397..comments2023-08-21T01:24:22.442-07:00Comments on The Write Journey: Third Campaigner ChallengeAlynza Smithhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09912072040743353688noreply@blogger.comBlogger52125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-993729896040206941.post-43514061433903644612011-11-05T16:18:47.158-07:002011-11-05T16:18:47.158-07:00A novel in 200 words. Just perfect. Great ending.A novel in 200 words. Just perfect. Great ending.Conley J. Boycehttp://www.coonboy.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-993729896040206941.post-30952371190326448882011-11-03T07:58:09.653-07:002011-11-03T07:58:09.653-07:00Nicely done! :)Nicely done! :)Margo Kellyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13474612650116392270noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-993729896040206941.post-19910684325286923892011-11-03T02:33:21.296-07:002011-11-03T02:33:21.296-07:00Hi Alynza, congratulations on making it to the fin...Hi Alynza, congratulations on making it to the final 12! I've now judged the entries, and you've come 10th. Well done you!!! I loved your twist ending, totally didn't see that coming :) <br /><br />Don't forget to pop by Rach Writes... to see what you've won :)<br /><br />Hugs,<br /><br />RachRachael Harriehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16764930101064527321noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-993729896040206941.post-58013916020314440292011-11-01T15:19:44.884-07:002011-11-01T15:19:44.884-07:00Wow! Thanks Nadja. I'm so excited! :DWow! Thanks Nadja. I'm so excited! :DAlynza Smithhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09912072040743353688noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-993729896040206941.post-78604556078447311442011-11-01T13:50:42.006-07:002011-11-01T13:50:42.006-07:00What a great piece, Alynza. It is a pleasure to r...What a great piece, Alynza. It is a pleasure to read - and I'm here to tell you that you are moving to the finals! Congratulations!Nadja Notarianihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01339595239944177531noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-993729896040206941.post-38534627222463953522011-10-29T17:47:02.079-07:002011-10-29T17:47:02.079-07:00Awesome! Thanks Grillyfish!Awesome! Thanks Grillyfish!Alynza Smithhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09912072040743353688noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-993729896040206941.post-57107758120492874842011-10-29T09:29:15.636-07:002011-10-29T09:29:15.636-07:00I loved your entry and was really surprised by the...I loved your entry and was really surprised by the ending - brilliant! I really wanted to keep reading, so I have sent you through to the second round of judging, well done!<br /><br />Good luck in the next round :)Grillyfishhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17910638116963555132noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-993729896040206941.post-64329991408630543482011-10-24T08:55:27.637-07:002011-10-24T08:55:27.637-07:00Great job. Loving the twist at the end.Great job. Loving the twist at the end.Maeve Frazierhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00788413883600771145noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-993729896040206941.post-13859815590309162292011-10-23T02:38:38.357-07:002011-10-23T02:38:38.357-07:00Excellent sinister twist. Good job.
mood (new fol...Excellent sinister twist. Good job.<br /><br />mood (new follower)<br /><a href="http://moodywriting.blogspot.com/" rel="nofollow">Moody Writing</a><br /><a href="http://twitter.com/mooderino" rel="nofollow">@mooderino</a><br />no.79mooderinohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01523337588830695638noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-993729896040206941.post-31389490981218970912011-10-22T17:06:20.473-07:002011-10-22T17:06:20.473-07:00My favorite ending by far! Loved it :)My favorite ending by far! Loved it :)Jennifer Younghttp://jennyleeyoung.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-993729896040206941.post-14079547955830955292011-10-22T10:58:15.335-07:002011-10-22T10:58:15.335-07:00Ooo, great twist at the end! I wondered what kind ...Ooo, great twist at the end! I wondered what kind of jerk would leave without paying for their drink, but that totally worked. :)Jesshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16496310224885631202noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-993729896040206941.post-23131770790088897182011-10-21T11:54:57.656-07:002011-10-21T11:54:57.656-07:00Definitely a surprise ending! And sort of science-...Definitely a surprise ending! And sort of science-fictiony. I like it!Lily Whalenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17794982719681805044noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-993729896040206941.post-5434939107536431362011-10-21T11:19:25.172-07:002011-10-21T11:19:25.172-07:00Oooh, a devious character! Well done:) I'm #65...Oooh, a devious character! Well done:) I'm #65.Gwen Gardnerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13132836346305559246noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-993729896040206941.post-33887830188599225942011-10-21T10:06:53.412-07:002011-10-21T10:06:53.412-07:00I loved the way you structured your piece - from t...I loved the way you structured your piece - from the beautiful, seemingly peaceful opening scene, to the "cliffhanger" ending! <br />This has the makings of a great suspense/thriller story - exactly my 'cup of tea'. I'm off to vote now.<br />(My entry is no.#47)MISHhttp://writer-in-transit.co.za/campaign-challenge-no-3/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-993729896040206941.post-70825685851331177312011-10-21T08:31:26.878-07:002011-10-21T08:31:26.878-07:00Right on. You built beautifully up to that wicked ...Right on. You built beautifully up to that wicked ending!Joannahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00633484787634197878noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-993729896040206941.post-61525547678781783542011-10-21T00:51:58.663-07:002011-10-21T00:51:58.663-07:00Wicked twist at the end. :) You have my vote.Wicked twist at the end. :) You have my vote.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-993729896040206941.post-17134554690884540812011-10-20T14:10:12.243-07:002011-10-20T14:10:12.243-07:00Awesome twist at the end! Good job!
I'm entr...Awesome twist at the end! Good job!<br /><br />I'm entry #69 :)Alyssahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08978921042324206592noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-993729896040206941.post-57670196057203460372011-10-20T13:50:59.515-07:002011-10-20T13:50:59.515-07:00Sinister and creepy. I thought this was excellent ...Sinister and creepy. I thought this was excellent and well deserving of moving to the next round. Congrats. Voting now :)Claire Hennessyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16576410137759875223noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-993729896040206941.post-34849809705173276792011-10-20T12:13:49.518-07:002011-10-20T12:13:49.518-07:00Hey...so that was the reason behind my story. LOL....Hey...so that was the reason behind my story. LOL. Great job.E. Arroyohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06634213563563094173noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-993729896040206941.post-81344700429344971922011-10-20T11:29:38.643-07:002011-10-20T11:29:38.643-07:00Oooh, chilling! (And I don't mean the mimosas....Oooh, chilling! (And I don't mean the mimosas.) :)Madeline Mora-Summontehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05529397293165046430noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-993729896040206941.post-41446935491370428282011-10-20T06:52:19.942-07:002011-10-20T06:52:19.942-07:00Sara I just noticed you are my 100th follower!! Ya...Sara I just noticed you are my 100th follower!! Yay finally broke triple digits. :)Alynza Smithhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09912072040743353688noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-993729896040206941.post-17360944615259686892011-10-20T06:51:12.030-07:002011-10-20T06:51:12.030-07:00Wow thanks everyone!
@Sarah - Thank you so much ...Wow thanks everyone! <br /><br />@Sarah - Thank you so much for moving me into the next round. How exciting! :)Alynza Smithhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09912072040743353688noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-993729896040206941.post-59761047561999477832011-10-20T01:02:55.076-07:002011-10-20T01:02:55.076-07:00This is one of the best examples of showing that I...This is one of the best examples of showing that I've read yet. And wow... that ending. Did not see it coming.Avery Marshhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15615057600393412922noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-993729896040206941.post-67255526014141232762011-10-19T16:50:36.572-07:002011-10-19T16:50:36.572-07:00Congratulations! I am posting as one of the judge...Congratulations! I am posting as one of the judges for the 3rd campaign challenge. You're moving into the next round. Excellent entry, I enjoyed it very much. Good luck!Sarahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00063058173619213791noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-993729896040206941.post-51341440613152460952011-10-19T13:02:44.627-07:002011-10-19T13:02:44.627-07:00What a sadistic character. And I love it, every bi...What a sadistic character. And I love it, every bit as much as your other entries. Once again, great job! :)David P. Kinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17259276981865439853noreply@blogger.com