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Showing posts with label shadows. Show all posts
Showing posts with label shadows. Show all posts

Monday, February 20, 2012

War of Shadows / 1st Campaigner Challenge 2012


Today is the First Campaigner Challenge of Rachael Harrie’s Fourth Platform Building Campaign!

The challenge is to write a short story / flash fiction in 200 words or less, excluding the title. It can be in any format, including a poem. Begin the story with the words, “Shadows crept across the wall”. These five words will be included in the word count.

For an additional (optional) challenge:

·         End the story with the words: “everything faded.” (also included in word count)
·         Include the word “orange” in the story
·         Write in the same genre you normally write
·         Make your story 200 words exactly!
  
 So here is my 200 word count short story. Enjoy!


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War of Shadows

Shadows crept across the wall of the forest leaving only darkness. I glanced over my shoulder as I ran, but didn’t dare look for long, otherwise I would be lost in the horrid beauty of it. Blackness so complete, absorbed every stream of light in its wake. There was nothing to do but run.

With a voracious appetite, it swallowed the vivid green of the leaves and the swirling colors of the wild flowers. Even the heels of my feet chilled as the shadows played with the bare soles of my feet.

Running was useless, but if the orange glow above the canopy of trees refused to give in, then I refused as well. The blazing sun was oblivious that its end was near, that the shadows had won.

I ran even faster and jumped over fallen limbs and moss covered rocks willing myself to make the last few steps to the forest’s edge. But the chills danced up my spine and took hold, refusing to play anymore. I fell to the ground with my eyes on the distant glow and watched as the blazing red tendrils of the sun gave in. Within seconds it was over and everything faded.

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